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AeroTech 2 Vessel Technical Readout
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Class/Model/Name: Mirage Class Super Destroyer
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3067
Vessel Type: WarShip
Rules: Level 3, Custom design
Rules Set: AeroTech2
Mass: 1,000,000 tons
Hull: Lockheed/CBM Destroyer
K-F Drive System: KF Mark XXV
Length: 905 meters
Power Plant: Lockheed Super Fusion Standard
Safe Thrust: 4
Maximum Thrust: 6
Armor Type: Durallex Assult Ferro-carbide
Armament:
256 Diverse Optics Type 20 Large Pulse Laser
64 Firestorm Laser AMS
28 Lightning Strike Heavy NPPC
Manufacturer: Lockheed/CBM Corporation Warship Division
Location: Coventry
Communications System: Lockheed/CBM Comset 100 Ultra
Targeting & Tracking System: Lockheed/CBM Targeting System
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==Overview:==
The Mirage Class Super Destroyer was developed by Lockheed/CBM as a bold
move into the Warship industry. The Mirage is expected to compliment the
lighter vessels in the LAAF fleet with its massive firepower.
==Capabilities:==
The Mirage draws the bulk of its firepower from an impressive array of
twenty-eight Heavy Naval PPCs, which are located on either side of the vessel
and provide it with massive broadside firepower. Augmenting this firepower are
a mass of two hundred and fifty-six Large Pulse Lasers mounted in quad turrets
that can quickly swat down enemy fighters and sixty-four Laser Anti-Missile
Systems located all around the vessel in order to keep enemy missiles, both
capital or standard alike, from damaging the hull. In addition, twenty
Aerospace Fighters and four Dropships provide an impressive compliment to the
ships weaponry.
To ward off boarding attempts, fifty Battle Armored Marines patrol the
ships hallways. The Mirage also carries an impressive 10,888 tons of general
cargo space and eight small craft to help move it around the fleet. Do to it
carrying only energy based weapons, however, the extra cargo space is often
used to hold munitions for other fighters and ships in the fleet. In addition,
the Mirage carries an impressive one hundred and eighty-four days of fuel and
three hundred and sixty-eight days of food in it's internal stores.
Also impressive is the fact that the whole vessel is equipped with grav
decks, which provide the entire ship with artificial gravity. The Mirage also
carries a lithium fusion battery and is accommodated with spacious private
crew quarters. The first of the two vessels ordered for construction, the LSF
Demolisher, is slated to have its keel laid down in 3072 even though the
blueprints were finished in 3067.
==Notable Vessels & Crews:==
Inner Sphere Vessels:
Lyran Alliance: LSF Demolisher [Begins construction 3072], LSF Devastator
[Begins construction 3073]
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Class/Model/Name: Mirage Class Super Destroyer
Mass: 1,000,000 tons
Equipment: Mass
Power Plant, Drive & Control: 240,000.00
Thrust: Safe Thrust: 4
Maximum Thrust: 6
Kearny-Fuchida Hyperdrive: Compact (Integrity = 20) 452,500.00
Lithium Fusion Battery 10,000.00
Jump Sail: No Sail (Fusion-Charged K-F) .00
Structural Integrity: 154 154,000.00
Total Heat Sinks: 4,814 Double 4,077.00
Fuel & Fuel Pumps: 7,418.00
Bridge, Controls, Radar, Computer & Attitude Thrusters: 2,500.00
Fire Control Computers: 756.00
Food & Water: (368 days supply) 884.00
Hyperpulse Generator: 50.00
Armor Type: Ferro-carbide (2,553 total armor pts) 3,079.00
Capital Scale Armor Pts
Location: L / R
Fore: 470
Fore-Left/Right: 425/425
Aft-Left/Right: 425/425
Aft: 383
Cargo:
Bay 1: Fighters (20) with 6 doors 3,000.00
Cargo (1) with 2 doors 4,000.00
Bay 2: Small Craft (8) with 2 doors 1,600.00
Cargo (1) with 2 doors 1,600.00
Bay 3: Cargo (1) with 2 doors 10,888.00
DropShip Capacity: 4 Docking Hardpoints 4,000.00
Grav Decks #1 - 5: (250-meter diameter) 500.00
Escape Pods: 40 (7 tons each) 280.00
Crew and Passengers:
60 Officers (58 minimum) 600.00
200 Crew (185 minimum) 1,400.00
90 Gunners (82 minimum) 630.00
50 Marine Battle Armor Troopers/Elementals 350.00
80 Bay Personnel .00
Weapons and Equipment Loc SRV MRV LRV ERV Heat Mass
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4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Nose 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Nose -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
2 Heavy NPPC FL/R 30 30 30 30 900 12,000.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
4 Large Pulse Laser L/RBS 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 80 56.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
2 Laser AMS L/RBS -- -- -- -- 48 6.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
4 Large Pulse Laser Aft 4(36) 4(36) -- -- 40 28.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
2 Laser AMS Aft -- -- -- -- 24 3.00
1 Lot Spare Parts (1.00%) 10,000.00
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TOTALS: Heat: 9,628 1,000,000.00
Tons Left: .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 17,546,064,976 C-Bills
Battle Value: 154,690
Cost per BV: 113,427.27
Weapon Value: 134,485 (Ratio = .87)
Damage Factors: SRV = 6,565; MRV = 5,962; LRV = 3,033; ERV = 1,215
Maintenance: Maintenance Point Value (MPV) = 674,098
(169,744 Structure, 309,250 Life Support, 195,104 Weapons)
Support Points (SP) = 404,020 (60% of MPV)
BattleForce2: Not applicable
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