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PostPosted: 26-May-2009 12:39    Post subject: Comments on The Long Road Home Reply to topic Reply with quote
Post any comment or critique here for Book III of my story. Hope that you enjoy it!

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PostPosted: 28-May-2009 13:49    Post subject: Comments on The Long Road Home Reply to topic Reply with quote
WOOT!!! lol!

Quick typo correction for ya though, "rain feel" should be "rain fell" by context. Smile
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