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master arminas
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Good morning, everyone. I have been posting some of a story-line that I have been writing on the fiction section, if you could, please let me know what you think. It is long (49 printed pages!), but has been broken up into short 'chapter' style postings.
I have really enjoyed this site; congratulations Mordel and all those who aid him in his endeavors. Please continue to keep posting--I enjoy reading all that you guys contribute. Now, if you wil forgive a lurker, I must return to the shadows to lurk some more.
Arminas tar Valantil
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| Posted: 06-Jun-2008 17:01 Post subject: Some semi-random thoughts . . . |
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I have always enjoyed what if stories and yours is very well written to my untrained eye. I am enjoying reading it.
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| Posted: 17-Jun-2008 18:33 Post subject: Some semi-random thoughts . . . |
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ok. you had me chocked up with those last two installments. Interesting twist with Kerensky.
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ralgith
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| Posted: 17-Jun-2008 19:43 Post subject: Re: Some semi-random thoughts . . . |
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| Vagabond wrote: | | ok. you had me chocked up with those last two installments. Interesting twist with Kerensky. |
I can only say one word: "WOW!!!!!!"
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| Posted: 20-Jun-2008 15:09 Post subject: Some semi-random thoughts . . . |
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Oh I can't wait to see the research and fun that this 'talking too' by Hiroyoshi will no doubt be.
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ralgith
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| Posted: 22-Jun-2008 20:39 Post subject: Some semi-random thoughts . . . |
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I'm on the edge of MY seat 
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master arminas
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| Posted: 23-Jun-2008 13:27 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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I've just changed the title. Let me know what you think--any feedback is more than welcome, everyone. Glad that you are enjoying the story so far.
Arminas tar Valantil
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Sleeping Dragon
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| Posted: 25-Jun-2008 01:39 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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I finally found the time to read through it. It took me a better part of the day, but I can't say that I regret doing it...
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ralgith
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| Posted: 25-Jun-2008 18:21 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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It is quite the story. I'm loving it so far and I can't wait till the end.
If MA there gives the OK I'll be uploading it in PDF once he is finished, as well as possibly doing an audio-ebook of it. 
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| Posted: 26-Jun-2008 03:49 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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Well, with Jinjiro dead there will be no Kentares... or are we to meet different people in the same setting? 
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| Posted: 26-Jun-2008 04:40 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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Oh the possibilities are endless. No primary heir, committed to return his honor after the war, Kerensky chair bound, and the fall out of Kurita, Davion, and the SLDF aiding a Cammeron back to Terra. I tingle at the changes.
My only hope is that the Cammeron doesn't die in the end allowing things to mostly play out the way they woulda/did. It would be a let down for a what if story like this or really damn good if done right.
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master arminas
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| Posted: 26-Jun-2008 09:08 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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Ralgith,
You certainly may. When it is finally complete, I will attache the entire MS Office file--complete with editing (much needed, I know).
Kerensky and Kurita is a 'working' title. I am thinking perhaps of calling it 'The Cameron Legacy--Book I of the Fall of the Star League.' Thoughts?
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| Posted: 26-Jun-2008 12:55 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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I think name the series "The Cameron Legacy"
And keep your working title as the name of the first book.
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| Posted: 26-Jun-2008 13:19 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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I'd leave the choice of the name for the time when you finish it...
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| Posted: 27-Jun-2008 01:42 Post subject: Comments on Kerensky and Kurita |
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Actually, to reiterate but slightly change my prior opinion...
Series: The Legacy of Cameron
Book 1 Title: Star Lord and Dragon or Kerensky and The Dragon
Both of those are good titles I think...
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