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Warhammer: 3025
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 Posted: 27-May-2005 20:53 Post subject: Help me fluff it! |
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I've got a bad case of writer's block here, and need some help. Naturally, I came here. 
Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3025
Config: Biped BattleMech
Rules: Level 1, Custom design
Mass: 95 tons
Chassis: Standard
Power Plant: 285 Pitban Fusion
Walking Speed: 32.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 54.0 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor Type: Standard
Armament:
1 PPC
5 Medium Lasers
2 LRM 15s
2 Small Lasers
Manufacturer: (Unknown)
Location: (Unknown)
Communications System: (Unknown)
Targeting & Tracking System: (Unknown)
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Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Mass: 95 tons
Equipment: Crits Mass
Int. Struct.: 145 pts Standard 0 9.50
Engine: 285 Fusion 6 16.50
Walking MP: 3
Running MP: 5
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 26 Single 15 16.00
(Heat Sink Loc: 2 LA, 1 RA, 4 LT, 4 RT, 2 LL, 2 RL)
Gyro: 4 3.00
Cockpit, Life Supt., Sensors: 5 3.00
Actuators: L: Sh+UA R: Sh+UA 12 .00
Armor Factor: 288 pts Standard 0 18.00
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 30 41
Center Torso (Rear): 18
L/R Side Torso: 20 27/27
L/R Side Torso (Rear): 12/12
L/R Arm: 16 32/32
L/R Leg: 20 39/39
Weapons and Equipment Loc Heat Ammo Crits Mass
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1 PPC RA 10 3 7.00
2 Medium Lasers LA 6 2 2.00
1 LRM 15 RT 5 16 5 9.00
(Ammo Locations: 2 CT)
1 Medium Laser RT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser RT 1 1 .50
1 LRM 15 LT 5 3 7.00
1 Medium Laser LT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser LT 1 1 .50
1 Medium Laser HD 3 1 1.00
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TOTALS: 37 60 95.00
Crits & Tons Left: 18 .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 8,780,850 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,549
Cost per BV: 5,668.72
Weapon Value: 2,370 / 2,370 (Ratio = 1.53 / 1.53)
Damage Factors: SRDmg = 24; MRDmg = 21; LRDmg = 10
BattleForce2: MP: 3, Armor/Structure: 7/7
Damage PB/M/L: 5/4/2, Overheat: 1
Class: MA; Point Value: 16
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Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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Erenon
Blighted Sun Battalion
2nd Company
"Seraph's Slaughter"
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Joined: 04-Jun-2004 00:00
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Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 01:45 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Any idea which state? Rough time?
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Warhammer: 3025
Freelance
Captain, AFFC (Ret.)
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 02:51 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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I'm leaning toward Free Worlds League or Steiner. I'm not sure about the year.
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Evil is like a bowl of oranges. Only one, instead, is an orange of DOOM. That orange has a fate to rule over the other oranges with an iron fist. That orange is me.
Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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StarRaven
Federated Suns
Leftenant General
Joined: 01-Jun-2004 00:00
Posts: 1138
Location: United States
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 06:32 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Steiner. I was going to suggest that it be an experimental augmentation of the Zeus, but the distribution is wrong. No ideas on the year, as the Zeus is an old 'Mech.
And I've got a question, Warhammer. How are you figuring the heat on this? It looks over-sinked to me, and I'm wondering what you see that I don't.
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Warhammer: 3025
Freelance
Captain, AFFC (Ret.)
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 07:00 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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I got what weapons I wanted and filled the rest of the tonnage with Heat Sinks. I see nothing but me being lazy.
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Evil is like a bowl of oranges. Only one, instead, is an orange of DOOM. That orange has a fate to rule over the other oranges with an iron fist. That orange is me.
Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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StarRaven
Federated Suns
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Location: United States
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 07:13 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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I see. Well, that explains why I didn't understand your heat sinkage, doesn't it?
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On 2005-05-28 07:00, Warhammer: 3025 wrote:
I see nothing but me being lazy.
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If that's the case, then perhaps it should be Marik after all. 
Then again, Steiner can do that just as well.
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Warhammer: 3025
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Captain, AFFC (Ret.)
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 07:55 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Here's a tweaked version. I hope you guys can help me. 
Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3025
Config: Biped BattleMech
Rules: Level 1, Custom design
Mass: 95 tons
Chassis: Standard
Power Plant: 285 Pitban Fusion
Walking Speed: 32.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 54.0 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor Type: Standard
Armament:
1 PPC
5 Medium Lasers
2 LRM 15s
2 Small Lasers
1 SRM 4
Manufacturer: (Unknown)
Location: (Unknown)
Communications System: (Unknown)
Targeting & Tracking System: (Unknown)
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Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Mass: 95 tons
Equipment: Crits Mass
Int. Struct.: 145 pts Standard 0 9.50
Engine: 285 Fusion 6 16.50
Walking MP: 3
Running MP: 5
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 22 Single 11 12.00
(Heat Sink Loc: 1 HD, 3 LT, 3 RT, 2 LL, 2 RL)
Gyro: 4 3.00
Cockpit, Life Supt., Sensors: 5 3.00
Actuators: L: Sh+UA R: Sh+UA 12 .00
Armor Factor: 288 pts Standard 0 18.00
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 30 41
Center Torso (Rear): 18
L/R Side Torso: 20 27/27
L/R Side Torso (Rear): 12/12
L/R Arm: 16 32/32
L/R Leg: 20 39/39
Weapons and Equipment Loc Heat Ammo Crits Mass
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1 PPC RA 10 3 7.00
2 Medium Lasers LA 6 2 2.00
1 LRM 15 RT 5 16 5 9.00
(Ammo Locations: 1 LT, 1 RT)
1 Medium Laser RT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser RT 1 1 .50
1 LRM 15 LT 5 3 7.00
1 Medium Laser LT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser LT 1 1 .50
1 SRM 4 CT 3 50 3 4.00
(Ammo Locations: 1 LT, 1 RT)
1 Medium Laser CT 3 1 1.00
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TOTALS: 40 59 95.00
Crits & Tons Left: 19 .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 8,987,550 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,444
Cost per BV: 6,224.07
Weapon Value: 2,021 / 2,021 (Ratio = 1.40 / 1.40)
Damage Factors: SRDmg = 22; MRDmg = 20; LRDmg = 10
BattleForce2: MP: 3, Armor/Structure: 7/7
Damage PB/M/L: 4/3/1, Overheat: 3
Class: MA; Point Value: 14
[ This Message was edited by: Warhammer: 3025 on 2005-05-28 07:57 ]
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Evil is like a bowl of oranges. Only one, instead, is an orange of DOOM. That orange has a fate to rule over the other oranges with an iron fist. That orange is me.
Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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Warhammer: 3025
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Captain, AFFC (Ret.)
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| Posted: 28-May-2005 21:40 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Writer's block went away.
EDIT: Fixed the fluff
Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Tech: Inner Sphere / 3025
Config: Biped BattleMech
Rules: Level 1, Custom design
Mass: 95 tons
Chassis: Crucis Type V Standard
Power Plant: 285 VOX Fusion
Walking Speed: 32.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 54.0 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor Type: Durallex Heavy Standard
Armament:
1 Tiegart PPC
5 Hellion-V Medium Lasers
2 Delta Dart LRM 15s
2 Diverse Optics Type 10 Small Lasers
1 Irian Weapons Works Class 4 SRM 4
Manufacturer: Irian BattleMechs Unlimited, Kali Yama Weapons Industries Inc.
Location: Irian, Shiro III
Communications System: Corean TransBand-J9
Targeting & Tracking System: Alexis Photon Targeting Acquisition System
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==Overview:==
The Klaw came from the Star League's need for a new support 'mech, one with
powerful long-range capabilities backed up with extended close-in firepower.
The 'mech also had to be cheap and operate with a minimum of maintenance,
although ammunition-dependancy was considered to be acceptable. To this end,
the 'mech was designed with oversized ammunition bays, and with no lower arms
or hands.
==Capabilities:==
The twin Delta Dart missile systems form most of the Klaw's power at range,
supported by the Tiegart PPC mounted in the 'mechs arm. This trio of weapons
can lay down truly devastating firepower at range.
Once the LRMs run dry, the Klaw will begin to close, keeping up the pressure
with the PPC on the way. Close in, the Klaw brings to bear a stunning array of
weaponry. A full battery of five Hellion-V lasers, combined with an Irian
Weapon Works Class 4 missile launcher make the Klaw a 'mech not to be taken
lightly. Twin rear-firing Diverse Optics Type 10 lasers, combined with the
'mechs ability to fire rearward with its' arm-mounted weapons, protect the
Klaw from the light and medium 'mechs that invariably try to flank around for
a backshot.
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Type/Model: Klaw KLW-1G
Mass: 95 tons
Equipment: Crits Mass
Int. Struct.: 145 pts Standard 0 9.50
Engine: 285 Fusion 6 16.50
Walking MP: 3
Running MP: 5
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 22 Single 11 12.00
(Heat Sink Loc: 1 HD, 3 LT, 3 RT, 2 LL, 2 RL)
Gyro: 4 3.00
Cockpit, Life Supt., Sensors: 5 3.00
Actuators: L: Sh+UA R: Sh+UA 12 .00
Armor Factor: 288 pts Standard 0 18.00
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 30 41
Center Torso (Rear): 18
L/R Side Torso: 20 27/27
L/R Side Torso (Rear): 12/12
L/R Arm: 16 32/32
L/R Leg: 20 39/39
Weapons and Equipment Loc Heat Ammo Crits Mass
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1 PPC RA 10 3 7.00
2 Medium Lasers LA 6 2 2.00
1 LRM 15 RT 5 16 5 9.00
(Ammo Locations: 1 LT, 1 RT)
1 Medium Laser RT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser RT(R) 1 1 .50
1 LRM 15 LT 5 3 7.00
1 Medium Laser LT 3 1 1.00
1 Small Laser LT(R) 1 1 .50
1 SRM 4 CT 3 50 3 4.00
(Ammo Locations: 1 LT, 1 RT)
1 Medium Laser CT 3 1 1.00
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TOTALS: 40 59 95.00
Crits & Tons Left: 19 .00
Calculated Factors:
Total Cost: 8,987,550 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,459
Cost per BV: 6,160.08
Weapon Value: 2,021 / 2,021 (Ratio = 1.39 / 1.39)
Damage Factors: SRDmg = 22; MRDmg = 20; LRDmg = 10
BattleForce2: MP: 3, Armor/Structure: 7/7
Damage PB/M/L: 4/3/1, Overheat: 2
Class: MA; Point Value: 15
[ This Message was edited by: Warhammer: 3025 on 2005-05-29 05:49 ]
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Evil is like a bowl of oranges. Only one, instead, is an orange of DOOM. That orange has a fate to rule over the other oranges with an iron fist. That orange is me.
Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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Nightmare
Lyran Alliance
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| Posted: 29-May-2005 01:09 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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On 2005-05-28 21:40, Warhammer: 3025 wrote:
Writer's block went away.
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But there's still no fluff? 
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Warhammer: 3025
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Captain, AFFC (Ret.)
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| Posted: 29-May-2005 02:58 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Crap. Stupid computer.
I fixed it.
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Evil is like a bowl of oranges. Only one, instead, is an orange of DOOM. That orange has a fate to rule over the other oranges with an iron fist. That orange is me.
Because sometimes, there are many guards in the castle.
Ya Rl'yeh!
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Nightmare
Lyran Alliance
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| Posted: 29-May-2005 10:43 Post subject: RE: Help me fluff it! |
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Banshee 3S, be afraid, be very afraid! The firepower of the Klaw is really nice, as long as you remember to start advancing in time before the LRM ammo runs out.
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