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PostPosted: 21-Apr-2004 22:39    Post subject: Anyone mind giving me their thoughts? Reply to topic Reply with quote

Little song here that I did; I don't have an audio version or anything ready yet, but imagine it as having a soft-rock, slow-dance beat.

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Magic


I don't know what to do anymore
This kinda feeling I just can't ignore
Gentle smile, open heart, open mind
It's the kinda luxury that you just can't find.

(chorus)
Some would say love has got a hold on me
That I'm losing sight that I cannot see
All I know is frankly I don't care
'Cause when I look at her her magic fills the air.

Dreaming sweet I can't help but stare
At the precious angel lying there
With her eyes I can see inside
I have no fears; she's got nothing to hide.

(chorus)

(solo)

She has my ring; it's sitting on her hand
She's got a peace I can't understand
She has a glow that I can't explain
Yeah she can free me from my pains

(chorus *2; fade out)

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PostPosted: 22-Apr-2004 04:33    Post subject: RE: Anyone mind giving me their thoughts? Reply to topic Reply with quote

Nice. It's rather poetic, which for a love song is good, imho.
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