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lucho
Draconis Combine
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 Posted: 03-Nov-2017 05:53 Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 |
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| TRO: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 | BattleMech Technical Readout
Name/Model: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001
Designer: lucho
Source(s): Custom Mordel.Net Units
Technology: Inner Sphere
Technology Rating: E
Tonnage: 65
Configuration: Biped BattleMech
Era/Year: Republic / 3112
Rules (Current): Tournament Legal
Rules (Era): Tournament Legal
Rules (Year): Tournament Legal
Total Cost: 15,100,525 C-Bills
Battle Value: 1,535
Structure: Reinforced
Power Plant: 325 XL
Walking Speed: 54 kph
Maximum Speed: 86.4 kph
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: None
Armor: Heavy Ferro-Fibrous
Armament:
3 SRM 4s
1 Snub-Nose PPC
1 Rotary AC/2
Manufacturer: Unknown
Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications: Unknown
Targeting & Tracking: Unknown
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Equipment Mass
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Internal Structure: Reinforced 13.00
Engine: 325 XL 12.00
Walking MP: 5
Running MP: 8
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks (Double): 10 [20] 0.00
Gyro: XL 2.00
Cockpit: Standard 3.00
Armor Factor: 208 10.50
Type: Heavy Ferro-Fibrous
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 21 30
Center Torso (rear): 9
R/L Torso: 15 24
R/L Torso (rear): 6
R/L Arm: 10 20
R/L Leg: 15 30
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Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Tonnage
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SRM 4 H 1 2.00
SRM 4 RT 1 2.00
CASE LT 1 0.50
SRM 4 LT 1 2.00
SRM 4 (Ammo 25) LT 1 1.00
SRM 4 (Ammo 25) [Inferno] LT 1 1.00
Snub-Nose PPC RA 2 6.00
Rotary AC/2 LA 3 8.00
Rotary AC/2 (Ammo 90) LA 2 2.00
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lucho
Draconis Combine
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Stinger07
The Quickscell Company
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| Posted: 03-Nov-2017 07:41 Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 |
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If I may comment as a 3D designer myself?
I very much like the design, especially the head. It is actually quite cool.
But, I would say that I would beef up some portions of the mech. The Hips and the arms are the biggest ones. Just make them bigger!
For the Rotary AC and the Snubbie, I would look at the arm of the Cuirass and the Vindicator respectively. Maybe even do a Vindicator arm that was "Chopped Off" just like a snub nose is described as.
I'd also likely increase the size of the SRMs a bit, just to make them look more imposing. If you don't have enough room to make the 2x2 pattern fit, make them offset in a zig-zag pattern.
Any which way, cool mech, and nice art!
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lucho
Draconis Combine
Gunjin
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| Posted: 03-Nov-2017 21:36 Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 |
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Thanks for the feedback! 
About the arms: I was trying to emulate the Loki, Thor and classic Marauder arm pods. I think I succeeded, but yeah, they're awfully thin.
About the hips: yeah, don't know, something's not working 
About the RotaryAC: I was trying to make a low-caliber gun. To me, the Cuirass' gunpod is too big for a RAC/2. But that's just my take on the subject *shrug*. The Snubbie was just a case of using a generic gunpod... TheSRMs: yeah, something
Again, thanks for the feedback! The art is more important for me than the stats
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lucho
Draconis Combine
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| Posted: 06-Nov-2017 06:49 Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 |
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Some new renders, hopefully addressing a couple of issues. Enjoy!
[img]orig00.deviantart.net/8b0c/f/2017/310/6/c/hyena_heavy_battlemech_by_1ucho-dbsx15c.jpg
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(still don't know why the first only appears as a link while the second appears as intended. A max limit to the resolution of embedded images?)
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Stinger07
The Quickscell Company
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| Posted: 06-Nov-2017 07:38 Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 |
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