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lucho
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PostPosted: 03-Nov-2017 05:53    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

TRO: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001
                 BattleMech Technical Readout

Name/Model:         Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001
Designer:           lucho
Source(s):          Custom Mordel.Net Units
Technology:         Inner Sphere
Technology Rating:  E
Tonnage:            65
Configuration:      Biped BattleMech
Era/Year:           Republic / 3112
Rules (Current):    Tournament Legal
Rules (Era):        Tournament Legal
Rules (Year):       Tournament Legal
Total Cost:         15,100,525 C-Bills
Battle Value:       1,535

Structure:            Reinforced
Power Plant:          325 XL
Walking Speed:        54 kph    
Maximum Speed:        86.4 kph  
Jump Jets:            None
    Jump Capacity:    None
Armor:                Heavy Ferro-Fibrous
Armament:             
    3 SRM 4s
    1 Snub-Nose PPC
    1 Rotary AC/2
Manufacturer:         Unknown
    Primary Factory:  Unknown
Communications:       Unknown
Targeting & Tracking: Unknown

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Equipment                                                             Mass                      
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Internal Structure:                         Reinforced                13.00                     
Engine:                                       325 XL                  12.00                     
    Walking MP:                                 5                                               
    Running MP:                                 8                                               
    Jumping MP:                                 0                                               
Heat Sinks (Double):                         10 [20]                   0.00                     
Gyro:                                           XL                     2.00                     
Cockpit:                                     Standard                  3.00                     
Armor Factor:                                  208                    10.50                     
    Type:                              Heavy Ferro-Fibrous                                      

                                    Internal         Armor     
                                    Structure        Value     
    Head:                               3              9       
    Center Torso:                      21             30       
    Center Torso (rear):                               9       
    R/L Torso:                         15             24       
    R/L Torso (rear):                                  6       
    R/L Arm:                           10             20       
    R/L Leg:                           15             30       

================================================================================================
Weapons and Ammo                                       Location          Critical     Tonnage   
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SRM 4                                                     H                 1          2.00             
SRM 4                                                     RT                1          2.00             
CASE                                                      LT                1          0.50             
SRM 4                                                     LT                1          2.00             
SRM 4 (Ammo 25)                                           LT                1          1.00             
SRM 4 (Ammo 25) [Inferno]                                 LT                1          1.00             
Snub-Nose PPC                                             RA                2          6.00             
Rotary AC/2                                               LA                3          8.00             
Rotary AC/2 (Ammo 90)                                     LA                2          2.00             
		

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lucho
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PostPosted: 03-Nov-2017 06:01    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

damn, the imageonly appears in the TRO, and is too small. Here's a bigger image Smile

[img]orig00.deviantart.net/3b99/f/2017/304/5/1/another_heavy_battlemech_ii_by_1ucho-dbsc5e2.jpg
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PostPosted: 03-Nov-2017 07:41    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

If I may comment as a 3D designer myself?

I very much like the design, especially the head. It is actually quite cool.

But, I would say that I would beef up some portions of the mech. The Hips and the arms are the biggest ones. Just make them bigger!

For the Rotary AC and the Snubbie, I would look at the arm of the Cuirass and the Vindicator respectively. Maybe even do a Vindicator arm that was "Chopped Off" just like a snub nose is described as.

I'd also likely increase the size of the SRMs a bit, just to make them look more imposing. If you don't have enough room to make the 2x2 pattern fit, make them offset in a zig-zag pattern.

Any which way, cool mech, and nice art!
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lucho
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PostPosted: 03-Nov-2017 21:36    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback! Very Happy Very Happy

About the arms: I was trying to emulate the Loki, Thor and classic Marauder arm pods. I think I succeeded, but yeah, they're awfully thin.

About the hips: yeah, don't know, something's not working Embarassed

About the RotaryAC: I was trying to make a low-caliber gun. To me, the Cuirass' gunpod is too big for a RAC/2. But that's just my take on the subject *shrug*. The Snubbie was just a case of using a generic gunpod... TheSRMs: yeah, something

Again, thanks for the feedback! The art is more important for me than the stats Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 06-Nov-2017 06:49    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

Some new renders, hopefully addressing a couple of issues. Enjoy!

[img]orig00.deviantart.net/8b0c/f/2017/310/6/c/hyena_heavy_battlemech_by_1ucho-dbsx15c.jpg
[/img]



(still don't know why the first only appears as a link while the second appears as intended. A max limit to the resolution of embedded images?)
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PostPosted: 06-Nov-2017 07:38    Post subject: Hyena ((Primary)) HN-001 Reply to topic Reply with quote

I like it!
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